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The one and only flaw in this particular piece is that you spelled 'they're' as 'their', which is the incorrect spelling for what you're using the word for. In terms of reading the piece, experiencing the flow, that second to last word ruined the ending.
I recommend fixing that to improve the overall experience of this piece, and then I recommend submitting it to my group!
I've seen your group and it is really awesome with lots of excellent people and works. It would be an honour if my work could be featured in your group. Cheers!