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July 7, 2012
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:iconhebechyuan:
I have lots of brilliant ideas... but just in my dreams =(
Anyone who experienced the same?
I guess I'm just too lazy in real life, thats why...
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~hellhoundp2k Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
This is a very beautiful piece - the flow of your lettering and the decoration you've placed around it are very well-executed; the color scheme throughout the words is quite well done as well.

The one and only flaw in this particular piece is that you spelled 'they're' as 'their', which is the incorrect spelling for what you're using the word for. In terms of reading the piece, experiencing the flow, that second to last word ruined the ending. :P

I recommend fixing that to improve the overall experience of this piece, and then I recommend submitting it to my group! :la: Good work overall mate. :)
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Mood: Joy ~Hebechyuan Jul 10, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks for the compliment, and I really appreciate your effort in helping me to correct this piece to make it a better one :hug: .

I've seen your group and it is really awesome with lots of excellent people and works. It would be an honour if my work could be featured in your group. Cheers!
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